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First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« on: February 05, 2012, 08:12:09 PM »

Thanks for everyone that voted and took part. I think we can all agree that the competition was a success and that we unearthed some really cool ideas worth pursuing.

Without further blabbering, here is a countdown of the finalists from last to first.



FOURTH PLACE
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THIRD PLACE
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SECOND PLACE
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THE WINNER!
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Apologies for the overly dramatic formatting ;)

The winner will be contacted in due course to discuss the formalities of receiving their copy of Screenwriting Tips, You Hack: 150 Practical Pointers for Becoming a Better Screenwriter in Paperback or Kindle format.

Feel free to post below congratulating the winner!



"Guts" (action/black comedy) by Alden C. Caele
"Utopia" (science fiction) by Claire Rooney
"R.I.P." (dark comedy) by Angelo Shrine
"The Pirate War" (action/sci-fi) by Tom East

"Falling Forward" (mystery/suspense) by Toni Walker (tonispywriter)
"MurderBowl" (action/comedy) by Tyler Moody
“Deadville” (Supernatural drama/comedy) by Sarah-Jane Sheppard
"Klutz" (drama/supernatural) by W. Adrian (agent)
"EN1" (Anthology) by Jackson Tyler
"Glampires" (action/horror/musical elements when time-filling montages are required) by Chris Wilson
"Human Remains" (Thriller / Horror) by S.A. Goodman (Guk)
"Year in Souls" (Supernatural Horror/Drama) by steelio2006
"Draper" (drama) by Lee A. Chrimes
"The League Unleashed" (Black Comedy Horror/Supernatural Action) by Suhelen Grotius (Batmom)
"Life With Death " (Comedy/Supernatural Drama) by Matt Latham
“Guardian” (drama/action) by Andew

« Last Edit: February 06, 2012, 07:13:38 AM by Vaughn »

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #1 on: February 05, 2012, 08:18:59 PM »
Congrats to the four finalists.  Seems like a close call between 3rd and 4th, and the top 2 who just pulled away from the ones behind but close between them also.

I'm not surprised by the winner, and the top 2 were two I voted for I believe, as felt they had that extra edge to them that just jumped from the pitches for me.

Would be nice to see all four at least attempt to offer a pilot if possible.  Congratulations to the winner, a wonderful concept of a show and just deserved it in the end.
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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #2 on: February 05, 2012, 08:20:50 PM »
GUTS! Wooooooo.

I knew RIP was Angelo's.


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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #3 on: February 05, 2012, 08:21:37 PM »
Congrats to one and all. Interesting to see who wrote what :D

My votes went to Guts and The Pirate War from the start but there were plenty of great entries. Hope some of you pursue your ideas!


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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #4 on: February 05, 2012, 08:21:53 PM »
Well done Alden! You got my vote for a fantastic pitch and a great concept.

Now how's about you write it, eh? :D

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #5 on: February 05, 2012, 08:27:46 PM »
Congrats Alden, Angelo and Claire, the pitches were all amazing! Also a big thanks to the admins, it was a great competition! Also, thanks for the vote Trix, it means a lot! :)

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #6 on: February 05, 2012, 08:29:26 PM »
The adminS? I think only one put the effort in ;)

We'll have to work out if/how we can help Alden develop his pitch as the winner, but I would skin ten cats to see R.I.P. DO IT ANGELO.

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« Reply #7 on: February 05, 2012, 08:33:07 PM »
Woo! This was a very, very nice thing to wake up to!

Thanks to everyone who voted for Guts. It was a hell of a lot of fun to put together. Thanks Li for the beautiful graphics, and well done to Tom, Claire and Angelo -- look how close it was! Could've been any of us. (I think Tim Olyphant helped. He's got magic eyes.)

Now I have to figure out what a pilot would really look like for it. :D


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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #8 on: February 05, 2012, 08:34:04 PM »
The adminS? I think only one put the effort in ;)

Okay, thank you Vaughn. Good enough for you? :D

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #9 on: February 05, 2012, 08:34:26 PM »
That'll do :D

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« Reply #10 on: February 05, 2012, 08:35:22 PM »
And thank you Vaughn for putting this together! It was awesome!


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« Reply #11 on: February 05, 2012, 10:04:26 PM »
Congrats Alden! (And to all the winners, of course!)

And a big round of applause for Vaughn - this competition was great fun :)

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #12 on: February 05, 2012, 10:46:27 PM »
Well done Alden - Guts was my favoured choice from the beginning!

Having said that, I also voted for Utopia every time as well, so I hope Claire takes that and runs with it too!

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« Reply #13 on: February 05, 2012, 10:52:16 PM »
Thanks Pete and SJ! :D

The discussion thread for Rd. 2 is closed, but are we allowed to know who wrote everything? I think we still don't know who wrote Deadville, Draper, Klutz or Glampires...


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« Reply #14 on: February 05, 2012, 11:00:16 PM »
Deadville was me, I know that much :D

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #15 on: February 05, 2012, 11:07:55 PM »
Congrats to Alden on Guts. I never suspected that was yours! I did guess that Angelo did R.I.P. It has his style written all over it. To echo Vaughn's request... DO IT!

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« Reply #16 on: February 05, 2012, 11:10:14 PM »
Thanks for your support, everybody! I may just have to write a pilot in the coming months.

But enough about me,

CONGRATULATIONS ALDEN!

I really, really, really dig the idea of bringing people back to life in order to solve a problem. That's just genius. Write. It. :D
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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition -- THE WINNER!
« Reply #17 on: February 06, 2012, 05:52:03 AM »
Awesome sauce. Congrats Alden. I voted for Guts from the beginning. Very cool concept.

Well done everyone.

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« Reply #18 on: February 06, 2012, 06:36:52 AM »
Thanks Pete and SJ! :D

The discussion thread for Rd. 2 is closed, but are we allowed to know who wrote everything? I think we still don't know who wrote Deadville, Draper, Klutz or Glampires...

I will put up a master list of all entries and entrants later today.

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« Reply #19 on: February 06, 2012, 06:56:54 AM »
Congrats, Alden! I voted for The Pirate War and Utopia. Well done to all the finalists. All thoroughly deserved to be there.