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First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« on: January 17, 2012, 01:51:14 PM »

Welcome welcome welcome friends, to the first ever MZPtv Pitch Competition. We're trying something new here, so we'd love for you all to take part.

It's not too difficult, and EVERYBODY is free to join.

Here's how it goes:

Lower down this post I will give you two different phrases, one of which you'll have to concoct a mini-pitch around. You then send me a Personal Message with your mini-pitch in. After the deadline I will be posting all of the mini-pitches up and the community will vote on their favourite. The creator of each mini-pitch stays anonymous.

The TOP 3 mini-pitches will then go to a final heat, where each user will have to develop a full pitch and compete against each other for the prize (again, voted for by the community).



Your mini pitch should be formatted like this (please include the bolded headings for clarity):

Title & Genre: e.g. "Santa's New Shoes" (comedy/romance)

Logline: The logline is a single sentence describing the series. For examples, look at this year's Black List

Summary: One paragraph going into more detail about the series.

Cast: Fantasy casting for your leads, between 1 minimum and five maximum.

No graphics are needed.




The two phrases are:

A new spin on the vampire mythos

or

Death in the 22nd century

Neither phrase needs to appear in the mini-pitch, you just need to base your pitch vaguely around those ideas.

The genre of the pitch is entirely your choice.




The first round closes on:

January 22nd at 00:00 GMT
(If we don't get enough entries the deadline may be extended)

The prize is a copy of Screenwriting Tips, You Hack: 150 Practical Pointers for Becoming a Better Screenwriter in Paperback or Kindle format.




Remember, your entry should be sent to me via Personal Message.
Please add "Pitch Competition" in the message subject.






The boring bit...

  • The competition is open to anyone with over 10 posts on MZPtv. Spam don't count, newbies.
  • You will need an Amazon account with the book added to your Wish List, should you win. I will purchase the book for you as a "gift". The buyer and recipient stay anonymous. I have run a competition like this before and it worked perfectly.
  • Needless to say, any evidence of plagiarism will result in your immediate banning from MZPtv. I will be checking suspicious entries.




Any questions, feel free to ask below.

And GOOD LUCK!






Vaughn's sample pitch


Title & Genre: "The Trade" (action/dark comedy)

Logline: In a technologically advanced future two bored assassins trade personal hit-lists with each other, but find their new missions lead to all sorts of complications.

Summary: Joe Malone is a dishevelled asshat with a mean streak and a Wolverine complex. Milton Hark is a beloved family-man with his own business selling luxury cars. Also, both are hitmen. Bored and frustrated with the current state of hired killing they resolve to swap their own personal hit-lists -- their top 100 "people that should be dead because they're bastards" -- to spice up their professional lives. But both soon realise this game has meant they've bitten off more than they can chew.

Cast: Joe (Michael Chiklis), Milton (Walton Goggins).
« Last Edit: January 18, 2012, 04:38:04 PM by Vaughn »

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #1 on: January 17, 2012, 04:49:45 PM »
Just glancing the Black List:

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CHEWIE by Evan Susser, Van Robichaux
A satirical behind the scenes look at the making of Star Wars through the eyes of Peter Mayhew who played Chewbacca.
AGENCY:  WME
AGENT: Mike Esola
MANAGEMENT: Industry Entertainment
MANAGER: Jess Rosenthal

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #2 on: January 17, 2012, 04:51:18 PM »
Summary: One paragraph going into more detail about the series.

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #3 on: January 17, 2012, 04:51:51 PM »
When you delete your posts after I reply you make me look a mug! A MUG I TELLS YOU!

But I'll leave it for emphasis. Series, not movie.

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #4 on: January 17, 2012, 04:58:07 PM »
Yeah...I found the answer and deleted it quickly in the hope you didn't see it....

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #5 on: January 18, 2012, 03:49:43 PM »
Mine's sent.

To be honest, I'm looking forward to playing "guess who pitched what" more than anything....

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #6 on: January 18, 2012, 04:18:56 PM »
I'm afraid to say anything because I don't want to sound like my normal way but I really want to do this BUT...I think this is hard with the topics so I'm here to clarify.  I think I'm reading into the topics too much.

The Vampire one is basically creating a new Vampire story show?  I didn't know if it meant that we had to create a new mythology and create something new about the vampires or what.

The Death one is really hard for me of course :) What level of death?  Like an apocalyptic type thing or what?  Because for it to be from another century it would have to be an idea based on something that doesn't happen now...futuristic!

Okay.  Bear with my stupidity and please clarify! :D

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #7 on: January 18, 2012, 04:21:11 PM »
You're thinking too narrow. The topics aren't there to be used as specifics. They could mean absolutely whatever you want them to mean.

I'm not going to post ideas because that's the entrant's jobs to come up with them ;)

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #8 on: January 18, 2012, 04:22:05 PM »
Do we have to describe our leads so people have a clue?

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #9 on: January 18, 2012, 04:24:55 PM »
The cast list is just a list. No detail required. The summary section should at least give some idea of the type of character (e.g. "a hardened war veteran with a love of puppies" or "a shy outsider who blogs about ants"). I guess that's really down to the writer though. Present as much info as you feel is required to get across what the show is, contained within a paragraph.
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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #10 on: January 18, 2012, 04:34:03 PM »
I suppose it would help if I post my own "entry" (one I just made up for the purposes of clarity).


Title & Genre: "The Trade" (action/dark comedy)

Logline: In a technologically advanced future two bored assassins trade personal hit-lists with each other, but find their new missions lead to all sorts of complications.

Summary: Joe Malone is a dishevelled asshat with a mean streak and a Wolverine complex. Milton Hark is a beloved family-man with his own business selling luxury cars. Also, both are hitmen. Bored and frustrated with the current state of hired killing they resolve to swap their own personal hit-lists -- their top 100 "people that should be dead because they're bastards" -- to spice up their professional lives. But both soon realise this game has meant they've bitten off more than they can chew.

Cast: Joe (Michael Chiklis), Milton (Walton Goggins).
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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #11 on: January 18, 2012, 05:01:45 PM »
And done!

I dare someone to out-oddball me :p

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #12 on: January 18, 2012, 05:29:36 PM »
Finished as well. Looking forward to seeing what everyone came up with. Mine was definitely one that I may flesh out more and build upon. Think it may have solid footing. Maybe as a webseries.
Loki: "I have an army"
Stark:  "We have a HULK"

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #13 on: January 18, 2012, 07:50:02 PM »
Lots of entries today! Thanks everyone, hopefully lots more to come. Should be fun.

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #14 on: January 19, 2012, 12:27:11 AM »
This is an awesome idea!
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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #15 on: January 19, 2012, 07:56:49 AM »
Even I have entered this. :vulcan:

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #16 on: January 19, 2012, 09:24:31 AM »
11 entries so far! Good stuff. Let's get to 20+ by the 22nd.

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« Reply #17 on: January 19, 2012, 01:26:26 PM »
I think my pitch I may end up continuing it even, cause  it may turn out pretty cool.
Loki: "I have an army"
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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #18 on: January 20, 2012, 11:05:55 AM »
2 days to go!

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Re: First Ever MZPtv Pitch Competition (with a prize!)
« Reply #19 on: January 20, 2012, 01:22:54 PM »
I really need to come up with something to enter this, just for fun even.   Right now, I'm drawing blanks on the two phrases and coming up with anything in that area which is annoying as usually have something running around my crazy mind of mine.

Got 2 days left though, so still plenty of time.  Back to the drawing board of imagination.
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