On another note, I was mildly confused by the final scene – was Vi seeing Andrew getting up out of bed a vision, essentially? The soul leaving the body? I guessed it might be but wasn’t entirely sure – plus isn’t Andrew already dead, hence being part of the Company. Are the rules different?
Yep, Vi seeing Andrew alive and well was another one of her "Am I crazy?" moments. Like when she saw him in her therapy group at the psych hospital. She's still under the influence of the pills they gave her.
Also, a bit of a sly trick, hopefully making the readers think he was fine, and then revealing the truth. I think perhaps it would play out better as a visual, rather than words on a page. Honestly, it's been so long since I wrote this, I had to go back and look up a few moments in the script.
Andrew, Vi and the other Company employees are brought back to life when they're hired. They're not dead people walking around.
Thanks for another detailed review!