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Re: S1 Discussion
« Reply #20 on: April 07, 2009, 05:57:52 AM »
So i like this serious alot.
I mean it may have Willy from Buffy and Angel but im glad that it doesnt Actually include any characters from Buffy or Angel
One thing that caught my eye about this series is that in the minisode you were able to have Willow in it but not say it was her.
Now i have a question.....since Amarra is now Drake is Gwen in trouble?
I definately like how you made Alex and Maria. They are two characters that should have been in the series
Now the "helping the helpless" thing from episode 3 was Kerri referring to Angel or the gang right now? Cuz i was confused
And i have a question: What year is it in the fic cause i suck at math.lol
Oh and when is the new episode?

All in all I like the Series. I hope there is more of it :)

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Re: S1 Discussion
« Reply #21 on: April 07, 2009, 07:46:35 AM »
Whistler and Gwen both come from Buffy and Angel, Whistler was in Buffy S2's finale "Becoming" whilst Gwen had a three episode arc in Angel S4.

Amarra and Drake bonding is something that needs further explanation and exploration, but now's not really the time :P What it means for Gwen though... the cliffhanger of 1x06 does feel like a major retread of Whistler being taken captive, but rest assured not everything is as it seems.

"Helping the helpless" was intended to be a phrase that had leaked into the population thanks to Angel Investigations, so Kerri was indeed thinking of AI, but her thinking was simply that Alex, Maria and Gwen are doing the same as a number of do-gooders from the past.

As for episode 7, announcement soon :)

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Re: S1 Discussion
« Reply #22 on: April 07, 2009, 08:34:52 PM »
Oh thats good that its going to get announce for episode 7.
So i have to know. What impulsed you to write Rift?
Also....i was also rereading episode 3 and i saw a reference to Lorne and Faith.
What exactly happened to Faith?
And we wont see Lorne right?
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Re: S1 Discussion
« Reply #23 on: April 08, 2009, 11:48:51 PM »
Rift was born out of me trying to bring my own spin to the Buffyverse, with elements of Angel's "doing the best we can" and Buffy's "dealing with life" things, combined with the idea of a team that hasn't come together naturally in the supernatural world, but one that's been forced together by their circumstances. I can't explain this fully just yet, but I will be doing so very soon once the finale is dealt with. It was also me trying to stick to the age-old "write what you know" when I didn't have the courage to do anything related to the Whoniverse (which I've since done and shall be going back to soon).

As for Faith and Lorne. I did have a plan for Lorne, not to come back in Rift but in related material (most likely mini-sodes that would come together to make an "Angel: What Happened Next") thing, but for various reasons, including the tragic death of the wonderfully talented Andy Hallett that won't happen - he did, and always has in my mind, gotten a happy ending where he lived away from the horrors of fighting the good fight, he did his bit with Angel, he was done.

Faith, details being withheld until later, died in combat the night before Maria overheard the watchers talking about her. I did have her coming back for S3 at one point, but this felt more natural to the flow of this 'verse.

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Re: S1 Discussion
« Reply #24 on: April 09, 2009, 08:10:11 PM »
oh okay. i get what ur saying. Well anyways i love the series and would love to see more characters put into it. :)

As for Lorne.....I miss Andy Hallett as well. I like that mini-sodes idea u had. I think you should still do it. Only dont use Lorne.....use Illyria. I know it sounds weird but think about it......She is a god and she would survive, maybe u should have her as Fred walking around wandering and have her voice over the entire thing explaining what happened to each and every member.

Now speaking of the Angel gang, they aren't going to appear are they? And the Scooby gang wont either right? And on that note, Faith.........her death will be revealed right? And are the Scooby gang leading the new council? Also is Tess evil? Cuz at the end of episode three..................... She came back and i was totally confused.

Finally maybe in season three instead of having Faith have Willow appear. I mean i always wondered what would happen if a newbie slayer met the lead witch in the council

All in all I love the series

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Re: S1 Discussion
« Reply #25 on: April 09, 2009, 08:19:23 PM »
As for Lorne.....I miss Andy Hallett as well. I like that mini-sodes idea u had. I think you should still do it. Only dont use Lorne.....use Illyria. I know it sounds weird but think about it......She is a god and she would survive, maybe u should have her as Fred walking around wandering and have her voice over the entire thing explaining what happened to each and every member.


Basically the minisodes would feature at least one character, sometimes more, and would show what happened to them immediately after Not Fade Away and then the next couple of years of their lives. It's a guaranteed no on that happening now though.

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Now speaking of the Angel gang, they aren't going to appear are they? And the Scooby gang wont either right? And on that note, Faith.........her death will be revealed right? And are the Scooby gang leading the new council? Also is Tess evil? Cuz at the end of episode three..................... She came back and i was totally confused.


Neither Scooby Gang nor Fang Gang will feature in Rift. Faith's death would have been covered in a minisode as would the rest of the Buffy cast, same as the Angel characters. Now though, I'll reveal it when I'm good and ready :P I can say though that the Scooby Gang are not leading the council, not to say one or two of them don't work with them though. Again, more on this when the issue of episode seven is dealt with.

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Finally maybe in season three instead of having Faith have Willow appear. I mean i always wondered what would happen if a newbie slayer met the lead witch in the council

I did originally have Willow billed for S4 in fact, but again, won't happen.

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All in all I love the series

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Re: S1 Discussion
« Reply #26 on: April 09, 2009, 08:45:11 PM »
Okay :)

I really like Rift.....Although I hope there are more main Characters in the future.

So is the gang going to have any love interests?

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**ANNOUNCEMENT**
« Reply #27 on: April 17, 2009, 04:37:54 PM »
The time has come, I'm sorry to say, to close the door on Rift. There are a number of reasons for this, primarily my personal dissatisfaction with the product I've put out there. So, the planned season finale will not be written, or at least I don't plan to write it. Six episodes is therefore all Rift will be putting out there. Rift is officially canceled.

I'm not leaving folks hanging though, and there will be answers to all of your questions, but they won't be coming for a couple of weeks yet. What I'm doing is compiling a document with everything I have on the show, all the answers, back story, the plans for the S1 finale, S2, right the way up to my eventual endgame. It's going to take a while to put it together, but it is coming along.

Thank you for reading, I'm just sorry that I couldn't quite live up to expectations. I will say one thing, when Lee and Tony and the others tell y'all that Showrunning is hard? They're not kidding folks! :D

All the best,

- Dan

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How S1 Would Have Ended.
« Reply #28 on: May 13, 2009, 07:51:04 PM »
When we left them, Alex and Maria believed Gwen had been kidnapped by Drake whilst in fact she was asking him for answers about who she really was - to which Drake responds that only Amarra, who he has now blended with, can answer her questions.

Having seen what happened for himself, Whistler informs the rest of his team that Gwen had gone willingly with Drake. They don’t believe him, but when they return to Whistler’s house they find her there waiting for them. While the team argues over what's happened lately - Gwen quickly falls ill and it becomes apparent that she has been drained of her powers and that it is killing her.

Ben (James Nesbitt) returns to Los Angeles and warns the team that they don’t have long before Drake summons the vampire god we saw in the 1x06 flashbacks. He also reveals to Maria, in private, that he has learned of her duplicity and he’s been ordered to take her back to the council when they are done preventing the apocalypse.

Following a conversation with the Black Coat Man, Drake speaks to Tory (Sarah Shahi), the new second-in-command following Jack’s defeat in 1x04 and asks her to find something for him. She later attacks Jacob Moss (Adrian Pasdar) (the man who, in the 1x02 alternaverse was kidnapped by the Shadowforms) and takes from him the same device we saw Gwen steal for the Black Coat Man in the pilot.

The team prepare for war, gathering allies in the form of Michael (Lennie James) and his transformed son Elliot (Christopher Judge) from 1x03. The wounded Jacob feels drawn to them having heard about them. It is suggested that them meeting his counterpart in the other dimension also draws him to them. He doesn’t remember them from the of course, but it's a little like deja vu. Finally, Victor (Michael Emmerson) would return, warning that the end was coming and that not all of them would survive, looking at Alex when he says it. The team would therefore consist of: Alex, Maria, Whistler, Michael, Elliot, Victor, Jacob and Gwen, who is recharged enough to fight for a short while thanks to a spell cast by Jacob.

Looking for any more allies, the team goes to visit Willy’s bar. This scene would see three key deaths, with Willy dying moments after they arrive from wounds sustained in unseen attack. His entire bar has been ransacked and there are no surviving demons inside. The culprit is revealed to be Drake, who attacks the team. They manage to fight him off well enough at first, though his immortality means his wounds heal as quickly as the team land a blow.

He eventually stops playing around and reveals that he has Gwen’s powers and tries to kill Michael using them. Elliot steps in the way and is strangely unaffected. The boy-turned-super-soldier retaliates with his own volley of electricity which cancels out Drake’s powers and returns them to Gwen. Drake is wounded and he doesn’t heal, much to his own surprise. Alex takes his opportunity and STAKES Drake, getting his revenge. When the vampire dusts however, he merely reforms into Amarra (Jeremy Irons) who cruelly breaks Alex’s neck.

Retreating, the team mourn their losses and come to realise that Elliot is perhaps their only hope at victory. Elliot, speaking for the first time, reveals that he is not the only one, that Gwen has the power to win the battle as well. They are “Avatars”, an ancient and powerful race, and they have been sent to Earth to observe the final conflict between their two creations: good and evil.

With this information, they lead the way into the final showdown with Amarra, who intends on drawing together the powers of his brethren (seen in 1x06) into the vampire God. He isn’t summoning anything, he’s becoming this God. He needs the powers of an Avatar to do it though, which he gets when Gwen and Elliot arrive.

The transformation begins when the team attack, the device Tory stole holding rings which grant the power of one of the pure-blooded vampires. Amarra becomes the Vampire God, the explosion of power literally blowing the roof off of his mansion, and the team struggle to hold him off. Tory leads the remaining members of Amarra’s cult against our allies whilst Amarra turns his attentions to the city. Maria sees Ben in trouble and he asks for her help, she doesn’t act and he's killed by Tory.

Whistler uses the powers he’s been holding back to deal with the vampires whilst Jacob, Victor, Gwen, Maria and Elliot cast a spell to strip Amarra of his powers just as the mystics did long ago to the first vampire God. They succeed, though the strain of such a powerful spell kills Jacob.

Amarra is stripped of his powers and burns up in the sunlight, leaving nothing remaining of the vampire God at all. Maria destroys the rings holding the power, and with that a shock wave runs through the room and all across the planet. There is nothing left of the original vampire, nothing to tie today’s vampires with their origins. They are, in a single act, stripped of their powers. Tory falls into the sunlight but doesn’t burn up. She runs away.

Whistler explains that he has to leave, The Powers are taking him away for using his powers and he disappears in an explosion of golden light. Elliot explains that despite the fact that he and Gwen may want Whistler back, they can’t. The other Avatars would not allow it as Whistler was supposed to be strictly neutral. He is gone forever.

Victor tells the rest of the team that Maria has been working behind their backs, and she is forced to run away when she cannot explain herself.

Gwen leaves the city and puts Victor in charge of the team when Elliot refuses - pointing out that he is supposed to be a mere observer and can only get involved when a fellow Avatar is in danger, though quite why Gwen has been allowed to get involved isn't revealed. A position of power would be too risky as he could become corrupted. Victor has no such qualms and takes the role happily.

Elsewhere, Maria asks her boss, the Black Coat Man what is going to happen now. Adam Kane (Ben Foster) steps out of the light, revealing himself to be the Black Coat Man and tells her that they are just beginning. He was Whistler's counterpart in the other world, and it seems that here he was something else entirely.

So, by the end of the season: Ben, Jacob, Drake, Alex, Whistler, Amarra, Willy and Gwen have all been written out with almost all of them being killed off. The team now consists of Michael, Elliot, and Victor - whilst The Black Coat Man’s team consists of at least himself (Adam) and Maria. Vampires have been stripped of their powers and weaknesses, though the issue of souls is not addressed.

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