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Blood Borne - Discussion Thread
« on: Tue Sep 6 2011, 07:17 »
Welcome to the Blood Borne discussion thread!

Talk about the lives (and deaths!) of those poor unfortunate souls left to do battle with the vicious infected that have taken over the world.

Likes, loves, and everything in between - it goes in here!

For all readers, beware - spoilers may be lurking....   :zombie:



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« Reply #1 on: Tue Sep 6 2011, 08:06 »
You're nipping in early to get the honour of first-aired webisode series, damn youuuuuu! :D

Seriously, I predict a riot. Over how great this will be. Looking forward to it.
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« Reply #2 on: Tue Sep 6 2011, 13:50 »
Great to see this airing so soon. Ooooh, exciting!

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« Reply #3 on: Tue Sep 6 2011, 19:51 »
Thanks for the words of excitement, guys!  Can't wait to unleash these puppies on the site!! :D

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« Reply #4 on: Tue Sep 6 2011, 20:22 »
SO. PUMPED.

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« Reply #5 on: Sat Sep 10 2011, 22:27 »
2 more days....  :D

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« Reply #6 on: Sun Sep 11 2011, 19:43 »
TOMORROW!

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« Reply #7 on: Sun Sep 11 2011, 23:40 »
Looking forward to this, Brian. I feel like you've done a very respectable job of marketing the project as a whole. There's something generally appealing about a project when you can see how much it's writer cares about it...I get that with this and you :)

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« Reply #8 on: Sun Sep 11 2011, 23:55 »
Thanks, Kyle!!  I really appreciate that, it means a lot.  I've been working on this idea since late 2009, so it has been with me for a really long time, so I think that's why I am so passionate about it.

I think folks will be surprised by some of the turns this story takes as it goes along, even beyond just the first arc. 

Can't wait to get people's thoughts on the entire first arc once it's aired! :D

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Re: Blood Borne - Discussion Thread
« Reply #9 on: Mon Sep 12 2011, 11:52 »
The premiere is up on the website guys and girls

http://www.mzp-tv.co.uk/2011/blood-borne-1x01-its-in-the-blood/

Just waiting on Brian to post it here. But it's there for your enjoyment!

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« Reply #10 on: Mon Sep 12 2011, 13:16 »
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« Reply #11 on: Mon Sep 12 2011, 16:35 »
Thank you Vaughn for posting a link!  :D

Perhaps one shouldn't go out drinking and partying the night before one's series is set to premiere....  :laugh:

Okay, so it's up here at the forum and at the website!  Enjoy, folks.  :D

Chris - thank you so much for posting my first ever official review!  And it's a good one!  Scratch that, a great one!  I greatly appreciate the positive feedback and can't wait to see your take on the upcoming webisodes this week!

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« Reply #12 on: Mon Sep 12 2011, 20:27 »
I've actually read the episode today. I thought it was rather good and I can't wait to read more!!

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« Reply #13 on: Mon Sep 12 2011, 20:44 »
Thank you so much for the kinds words.  :)  At least you don't have to wait long for more!  We have brand-spankin' new webisodes ALL week long!

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« Reply #14 on: Wed Sep 14 2011, 05:11 »
Episode 3 is live.  This is the first webisode that no one else has ever seen before (besides me and my staff) so I hope you all enjoy the total newness of it all!  :D

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Re: Blood Borne - Discussion Thread
« Reply #15 on: Wed Sep 14 2011, 06:39 »
Damn you and your cliffhangers! :D Looking forward to the next installment

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« Reply #16 on: Wed Sep 14 2011, 06:45 »
Cliffhangers are fun.  :D

Every single ep in Arc One beginning with this one has them, so I'm afraid your frustration will only continue!  In a good way, I hope.  :laugh:

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« Reply #17 on: Wed Sep 14 2011, 17:08 »
The next two episodes I've read was rather awesome!! Spooky cliffhanger at the third episode. So far episode 3 of your arc one is awesome thanks to all the stuff you've written on it. I'll review the rest of the arc when I return from my Dad's either Friday or Saturday.

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« Reply #18 on: Wed Sep 14 2011, 17:27 »
Thank you for the kind words!  I'm glad you enjoyed episode 3.  :D  Look forward to your thoughts on the rest of Arc One!

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Re: Blood Borne - Discussion Thread
« Reply #20 on: Thu Sep 15 2011, 13:26 »
So! MZP's debut webseries is up and running. So far? Not bad.

It's become an unfortunate side effect of the 'infected' genre (as it will now have to be known) that there are almost too many tropes at play within it now. Blood Borne's first few parts suffer from having to run through the gamut of apocalypse tropes, from being separated from a loved one (Y: The Last Man), abandoned cities (28 Days Later, The Walking Dead), the scavenger hunt lifestyle (Zombieland, Land of the Dead) and even good ideas like
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have been used before (28 Weeks Later, Land of the Dead again), so really a series like this lives and dies on its characters, and any new spins or twists to established tropes they can throw in.

So far, Nick's a little bland, so it's teacher-turned-survivor Roger who's showing the most personality. Logan as the self-serving jackass who could ditch them at all any minute could be interesting, but after 40 pages we should be getting a bit more pizazz out of the gang by now. Hopefully they'll start to gel better now we have a proper team to work with - and reveals in the brands of Infected on offer could also open up into something fun.

The writing quality isn't in doubt - apart from a few wonky lines here and there, Brian's wonderfully visceral descriptions of the Infected and their attacks really sell this, creating a detailed, visual atmosphere throughout. Also, Brian has gotten the knack of the 10-page webisode format bang on from episode one, with plot movement and a nasty cliffhanger each and every instalment - there's always the fear webisodes could just turn into a 60-page script broken into 6 uneven segments, but no such problems here.
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Re: Blood Borne - Discussion Thread
« Reply #21 on: Thu Sep 15 2011, 18:52 »
Sorry that I haven't properly posted ep 4 here on the board, I'm working a weird shift today so I didnt have time to post it up before going in - at least it's on the main site!  :D  Thanks for posting up a link, Vaughn.

Lee - thank you so much for providing some really great feedback!  I can't really piece apart what you said and respond properly right this moment, but I will once I get home.  All I can say is thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond!!  :D

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« Reply #22 on: Thu Sep 15 2011, 19:11 »
No worries - in a nutshell, I think you had to get all the standard zombie movie stuff out of the way in the first few episodes so you could get the band together and start throwing some new stuff in there, so I reckon it'll keep on an upward swing now :)
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« Reply #23 on: Thu Sep 15 2011, 22:30 »
Hello again!  I want say again how thankful I am that you took the time to read and review my lil series.  :D

I understand what you mean about the tropes of a post-apocalyptic zombie/infected story.  There are quite a few cliches and pitfalls that can go with that sort of storyline.  I know that the first few webisodes can seem similar to some of those other stories, as far as the setups and the setting and all of that.  I think that many will see that as we move into Arc 2 and beyond, this goes way beyond a simple virus/infection story.  There will be a lot more going on than just that, and also the characters will become much more fleshed out.

There are still 2 more characters that are going to be introduced in the next webisode that will end up playing an integral part in the upcoming arcs.  Each character will end up serving a purpose throughout their time on the seres (however long or short, depending on how long they live :D ). 

I can understand how Nick might come across a little bland to you at first.  His motivations are pretty cut and dry as we start out, with his primary goal being about finding Janine, but as the series wears on, there will be other obstacles to overcome and other character interactions that should add many more layers to his character (I hope!!).

I think your fears about not much happening within the first 40 pages will be washed away once you read the final 2 installments of Arc One.  A lot gets packed into those final webisodes, and the sixth webisode is a bit of extended one, going to almost 15 pgs. 

Overall, I can't say how grateful I am for the sterling comments about the writing and the descriptions of the infected.  They are the stars of the series just as much as the humans we are rooting for to survive!  I want them to be just as detailed and interesting as the humans.  And don't worry - there's stuff about Marcus that makes him different than anything else you've seen so far, but you'll just have to wait until later arcs to discover what that is!  :D

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« Reply #24 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 07:10 »
Ending to 1x04... well I didn't see THAT coming :D

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« Reply #25 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 07:22 »
Yay!  :D  Glad you were surprised.  I was hoping it would be!

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« Reply #27 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 07:36 »
Thanks, Vaughn!  :D

I just posted a link in the Episodes Thread as well.  This episode kicks off the finale of Arc One in a major way, so I hope people enjoy it!

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« Reply #28 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 17:00 »
The finale of Arc One goes live tomorrow...

Everyone excited to see how it all turns out?  I'm pretty buzzed to share it with you all because I think it's a really fun, action-packed webisode.  Once this story concludes, we'll be moving on to a whole new storyline in Arc Two, but rest assured, there will be some carry-over as well!

Can't wait to see what people's thoughts are on MZP's first-ever aired complete sequence of webisodes!  :D

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« Reply #29 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 17:08 »
I have no idea where you're going with this, but I'm very intrigued to find out. Each episode has twisted a different way than I've expected.

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« Reply #30 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 17:28 »
It only gets weirder.  :laugh:

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« Reply #31 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 17:31 »
I'll be catching up with this over the weekend, thought I'd do it all in one go!

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« Reply #32 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 17:42 »
I figured a lot of people would probably end up doing that.  :D  Thanks, Li, I look forward to your thoughts!

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« Reply #33 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 19:01 »
I just read the first 5 in one go! I've enjoyed them, but my preference for the longer format shows here. I would have preferred to see this zombie story as a film, with this perhaps being slowed down to allow for more character building, and have this as the midpoint climax of the movie.

But aside from mere taste, and the fact that webcomics are not my preference, the writing is good, characters are solid, and it moves fast. One could argue too fast, as a zombie style thing needs those slow, character development moments, so when Tomorrow's inevitable slaughter arrives, you really care and want people to survive. I think, despite the fact that it's only been 50 pages so far, you've done surprisingly well at building these characters. Roger being my favourite, and I do so hope he makes it out of here alive.

So yes, short: Well written, good story and even good characters, but the only reason I don't enjoy it as much as I should - is it's chosen format.
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« Reply #34 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 19:55 »
I can understand your concerns about the format, Jackson.  It's different than a normal full-length series.  You sort of have to approach everything differently.  I'm glad that you enjoyed it for what it was, though and I greatly appreciate the kind words!  I think you might be surprised by what happens in the finale webisode...  :D

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« Reply #35 on: Fri Sep 16 2011, 23:41 »
I've read the next two episodes and it's getting better with each episode that is airing. I can't wait for the finale of arc one. If you still need help with arc two I'll be willing to give it a shot, just let me know. :)

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« Reply #36 on: Sat Sep 17 2011, 00:01 »
Thank you, HeroineX!  I don't believe I've ever caught your real name.  I appreciate you being such a loyal reader and reviewer!  Warms my cold, dead little heart.  :D  I think there is a real progression of the storyline as you go from one webisode to the next, and the tension just keeps getting thicker and thicker as we go.  Things are going to get WAY more dramatic in the next couple of arcs, so I really look forward to seeing what people think of all of that!

Luckily there isn't much longer to wait for the Arc One finale!  :D

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« Reply #37 on: Sat Sep 17 2011, 04:46 »
Thank you, HeroineX!  I don't believe I've ever caught your real name.  I appreciate you being such a loyal reader and reviewer!  Warms my cold, dead little heart.  :D  I think there is a real progression of the storyline as you go from one webisode to the next, and the tension just keeps getting thicker and thicker as we go.  Things are going to get WAY more dramatic in the next couple of arcs, so I really look forward to seeing what people think of all of that!

Luckily there isn't much longer to wait for the Arc One finale!  :D

That's totally good to hear!! BTW my real name is Amanda, trying to get a writing job here so I can have a chance. LMAO.

Back on topic, I am waiting (although it's not too long) until the epic finale, I found a show worth reading at most in a long time.

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« Reply #39 on: Sat Sep 17 2011, 08:00 »
Welp, kids, that's all you get until October when we return with Arc Two.  Send your thoughts on through of what you thought of the sixth webisode and the arc as a whole.

Did you love it?  Hate it?  Indifferent?

Let's hear it....  :D

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« Reply #40 on: Sat Sep 17 2011, 08:53 »
I'm gonna say, my enjoyment of this series has really surprised me - with the format n' all. But this has been a great zombie story, well told. Episode 6 broke the like, cardinal zombie rule: No one died. That wasn't a bad thing though, there was real tension in that situation, and the diner fight was a well written showdown. This has been a good series - and I am very much interested in seeing Arc Two when it rolls around.
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« Reply #41 on: Sat Sep 17 2011, 13:54 »
This is all interesting, and I thought this was well written. I will be waiting for arc two like the rest of us!! Happy writing Brian!!

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« Reply #42 on: Sat Sep 17 2011, 16:06 »
Thank you Jackson and Amanda!  I'm so glad you guys liked it!  I had so much fun writing all of those webisodes so it's been really great getting to share them with you guys.  :)

Awesome feedback - thanks again!!

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« Reply #43 on: Sat Sep 17 2011, 17:48 »
So, I've just finished the first two episodes and I have to say...wow.. I'm not a big fan of zombie films, but this really surprised me. Very well-written with a very interesting protagonist. Dying to know about Janine's fate. It's very intense and has a great atmosphere. The zombies are very vicious...as they should be. I really felt bad for the soldier in 1x01 - a loyal person that really lost all hope. The cliff-hanger was intense and I just couldn't stop there. I really enjoyed the second episode. Roger seems like an interesting character - hope we can learn more about him.  The scene in the shop was very intense. Looking forward to more. :)

Will read the rest of the episodes as soon as I can...
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« Reply #44 on: Sat Sep 17 2011, 18:24 »
I'm glad you got pulled in, Rocky!  I have always been a huge fan of zombie/infected movies and stories, so I have been over the moon writing this series.  I've always wanted to do my own take on the genre, so it's been a blast telling these stories.

So thrilled you seemed to like the first 2 webisodes so much!  Can't wait to hear your take on the rest of Arc One!

Thank you again for reading and reviewing.  :D

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« Reply #45 on: Sun Sep 18 2011, 00:41 »
1x03

I'm liking the growing rapport between Nick and Roger, their personalities seem to strangely compliment each other somehow despite Nick's sometimes cold demeanour.

"This was probably how it looked before the apocalypse."  :D

I'm liking Roger more and more. Death, violence, monsters ... where's the chocolate? A man after my own heart. The reveal of the day-things hits us at just the time, just as we start to think the guys will at least be safe during the day. I'm predicting many more of these little cliffhangers!

1x04

It's nice to see Nick showing more of his caring side towards Roger. I guess it would be easy to forget to care about other people in a situation like this. It's interesting that the infected have taken people prisoner to turn into their own instead of just tearing them apart, suggests that they have some kind of intelligence left and aren't just mindless monsters. Though apparently not smart enough to lock the basement door or chain them up.

Logan is a dick.  ;)

And I was right about the cliffhanger. An infected who can talk? Hmm ...

1x05

Fern is starting to grow on me, the little comments about wishing she was one of the people who left Little Creek makes her more sympathetic and less "I'm having a breakdown over here". Roger is still stealing the show for me though. Does the man ever think about anything except food?  :-P

Though I'm not entirely sure there's much sense in heading back towards the town they all just escape from barely intact ... a milkshake does sound good.

I like Beth, I can see her being the motherly one of the group. I interpreted her comment about not wanting to have a child in this world as being a really sad thing, but I don't think she could stop herself being motherly on first impression.

And the cliffhanger. Oh, shit.  :D

1x06

The attack was really well written, very tense with all the discoveries the gang are making about what the infected are capable of. I wasn't sure they were going to get out of there and I was surprised they all managed to survive!

The ending was very interesting, this new infected somehow gaining some awareness by eating Marcus' flesh. I'm intrigued.


Overall, I enjoyed this first arc. It's tense, well written, occasionally horrific and full of interesting little characters and situations. I'm looking forward to learning more about the infected, where they come from and how the hell this little band of survivors are going to get shot of them. I think this was particularly interesting for me as well, to see how someone else has tackled this genre in webisode format.

Arc One: 8/10

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« Reply #46 on: Sun Sep 18 2011, 01:27 »
Hi Li!  Thank you for taking the time to read and review the rest of Arc One!

I will address each mini-review separately!

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I'm liking the growing rapport between Nick and Roger, their personalities seem to strangely compliment each other somehow despite Nick's sometimes cold demeanour.

"This was probably how it looked before the apocalypse." 

I'm liking Roger more and more. Death, violence, monsters ... where's the chocolate? A man after my own heart. The reveal of the day-things hits us at just the time, just as we start to think the guys will at least be safe during the day. I'm predicting many more of these little cliffhangers!

I'm glad you are able to sense this relationship between Nick and Roger.  You worry sometimes about these types of things really shining through, especially in such a short format.  Nick does come across a bit cold sometimes, it's because right now in this early stage, he is so focused on simply getting to Janine, he hasn't really become attached to anyone else.  This changes as the series wears on and he begins to form a psuedo-family with the group.

One thing to quickly learn about Blood Borne - there will always be cliffhangers and there will always be danger!  :D

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It's nice to see Nick showing more of his caring side towards Roger. I guess it would be easy to forget to care about other people in a situation like this. It's interesting that the infected have taken people prisoner to turn into their own instead of just tearing them apart, suggests that they have some kind of intelligence left and aren't just mindless monsters. Though apparently not smart enough to lock the basement door or chain them up.

Logan is a dick. 

And I was right about the cliffhanger. An infected who can talk? Hmm ...

That part probably should have been made more clear.  They were locked into the basement, but it was supposed to be as if the infected that were being controlled by Marcus sort of didn't know what they were doing unless he was around to influence and control them.  I think once you get to the last 2 webisodes of Arc 1, it becomes more clear about his influence on the others.  Logan is definitely a dick, and will continue to be a dick - in fact, he does something REALLY BAD in Arc Two......so just wait.  :D

You will learn more about what exactly is/was up with Marcus in Arc Three.

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Fern is starting to grow on me, the little comments about wishing she was one of the people who left Little Creek makes her more sympathetic and less "I'm having a breakdown over here". Roger is still stealing the show for me though. Does the man ever think about anything except food? 

Though I'm not entirely sure there's much sense in heading back towards the town they all just escape from barely intact ... a milkshake does sound good.

I like Beth, I can see her being the motherly one of the group. I interpreted her comment about not wanting to have a child in this world as being a really sad thing, but I don't think she could stop herself being motherly on first impression.

And the cliffhanger. Oh, shit.

Fern is an interesting character.  She is supposed to be this subservient, quiet wallflower type of individual, one who's spent her whole life being repressed and oppressed.  It's funny because this apocalypse has probably set her free more than anything else could have, because now she can be indepedent and stand up for herself.

Just to clarify, they were not going back towards the center of town to go to Molly's Diner.  They were on their way out of town and Fern told the group that the diner is right by the border of town, where the interstate is.  But Roger did really want that milkshake!

Beth's story is one that I can't WAIT for the readers to see over the course of the entire first season.  Once we get to Arc Five....oh man....holy CRAP, just wait!!!  :D

Me loves cliffhangers. :laugh:

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The attack was really well written, very tense with all the discoveries the gang are making about what the infected are capable of. I wasn't sure they were going to get out of there and I was surprised they all managed to survive!

The ending was very interesting, this new infected somehow gaining some awareness by eating Marcus' flesh. I'm intrigued.

Overall, I enjoyed this first arc. It's tense, well written, occasionally horrific and full of interesting little characters and situations. I'm looking forward to learning more about the infected, where they come from and how the hell this little band of survivors are going to get shot of them. I think this was particularly interesting for me as well, to see how someone else has tackled this genre in webisode format.

I wanted everyone to survive because it puts the audience on guard.  It makes you wonder if and when these people will die.  It was really difficult for me to make this decision, but ultimately, I decided it would actually make people MORE wary about the future of these characters if they all survived so far.  If I killed someone in 1x06, not only would it not have as much weight to it because we haven't spent enough time with them to truly be 100% invested, but also leaving them all alive makes you wonder just WHEN it might happen...

Don't expect to get TOO much on the infected to who has seemingly been affected by Marcus's flesh in the next arc.  We WILL be going back to that storyline, but there are more pressing matters that must be dealt with first.

I love how this series is open to ALL kinds of infected.  There will be many types that we get introduced to over the course of the series.  In the next arc, we meet an ENTIRELY new kind that is nothing like what we've seen so far....

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WOO HOO!  That is an awesome score!  Thank you so much, Li!  I appreciate all of your thoughts, compliments and questions.  I think I read your post like five times before responding because I just couldn't stop laughing/giggling/smiling.  :D

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I love how this series is open to ALL kinds of infected.  There will be many types that we get introduced to over the course of the series.  In the next arc, we meet an ENTIRELY new kind that is nothing like what we've seen so far....

I think this is really what's working so far too. Two webisodes go by and you think "okay, I know what these guys have to deal with", then there's not only day-things but a free-thinking infected, and it leaves you wondering what's coming next. These characters are in an impossible situation, but they think they understand the rules - then the rules get changed on them.

I feel like this is where most of the drama will come from for this series and I'm looking forward to seeing how that plays out.

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« Reply #48 on: Sun Sep 18 2011, 01:44 »
I believe there will be 5 or 6 different types of infected introduced by the end of Season One.  I don't want to give anything away, but there's a bit of a paradigm shift in Season Two, so there is a completely different set of rules once we get that far.  :D

Can't say too much!!  :laugh:

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« Reply #49 on: Wed Sep 21 2011, 08:39 »
Yep, enjoyed the last two, although they did get a bit cheesy in places - Beth talking about wanting to have a family, and the shotgun-sporting yee-haw aw shucks hick of a husband were a bit wonky. Roger also seemed to fade into the background a bit here, which is a shame. The actual action was still very good, although the attack on the diner was maybe a bit too fast-paced for its own good - the infected swarmed the place so quick I don't think the characters had much chance to react to it! Intruiging ending, though, so points for that.

One element that's lacking is a sense of how the apocalypse happened, though. Apart from a snatch of voiceover from Nick in Part One, nobody's really talked too much about what's going on, tried to figure it out, come up with theories, discussed what they've seen or heard, so as a result it's a bit hard to get a sense of how long this has been going for, how quickly it spread or other elements. The pilot of Walking Dead did an excellent job of this, taking its time to both show and tell you about what had been going on while Rick was in hospital - here you unfortunately had to rush into your story without having much room to establish the world, and while that momentum did keep things interesting, it's left the circumstances that have created the Blood Borne world a bit too vague.

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